Wednesday, 17 August 2016

Week 5 Monday - Second Interim

We had our second interim critique this Monday. We got more feedback on our posters from the tutors and peers.





It became apparent that many of us were still unclear on how similar our two posters needed to be. I'd assumed my posters were similar enough, but I got no feedback on my second poster and was advised to develop the first more, so I'm back to thumbnailing a second poster design based on the first.



Critique for poster 1:
  • Make the sleeping person more recognizable as a person.
  • Having the homeless person barely noticeable is good thematically, but they should be more apparent in terms of design so people don't miss them completely.
  • More contrast; highlighting the figure.

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